Feb. 21, 2008
Charles McCollum
Managing Editor
The Herald Journal
75 West 300 NorthLogan, UT, 84321Phone: (435) 752-2121
Local Investing Association Provides Education and Practice to Assist Individuals on Quest for Financial Independence
www.cvaia.com
Dear Mr. McCollum,
Cache Valley Area Investors Association (CVAIA) provides people with the correct mentality and approaches to investing so they can be successful, which results in them spending their time doing something they love, not just a job that provides an income.
This member driven group is the first of its kind in Cache Valley. President Parker believes that with his help, anyone can go from an earned income of showing up for work and receiving paychecks to one completely passive and free of debt within three to 10 years.
CVAIA began in August 2007 and now has members from many geographical locations and from all walks of life. The members come together with the same belief: that education mitigates the risks of investing. CVAIA embraces the Law of Attraction, Law of Abundance, and Law of Exchange.
Please feel free to visit our website to learn more. If you have further questions, please let me know and I would love to give you more information.
Sincerely,
Jamie Urruty
PR Professional
Cache Valley Area Investors Association
Charles McCollum
Managing Editor
The Herald Journal
75 West 300 NorthLogan, UT, 84321Phone: (435) 752-2121
Local Investing Association Provides Education and Practice to Assist Individuals on Quest for Financial Independence
www.cvaia.com
Dear Mr. McCollum,
Cache Valley Area Investors Association (CVAIA) provides people with the correct mentality and approaches to investing so they can be successful, which results in them spending their time doing something they love, not just a job that provides an income.
This member driven group is the first of its kind in Cache Valley. President Parker believes that with his help, anyone can go from an earned income of showing up for work and receiving paychecks to one completely passive and free of debt within three to 10 years.
CVAIA began in August 2007 and now has members from many geographical locations and from all walks of life. The members come together with the same belief: that education mitigates the risks of investing. CVAIA embraces the Law of Attraction, Law of Abundance, and Law of Exchange.
Please feel free to visit our website to learn more. If you have further questions, please let me know and I would love to give you more information.
Sincerely,
Jamie Urruty
PR Professional
Cache Valley Area Investors Association
123 Creative Way
Logan, UT 84341
Contact Info- 801-555-4567
Jamie Urrety-
ReplyDeleteThis looks good Jamie. I think it would be a good idea to expound on
your ideas a little bit more, give a little bit of detail. You're
trying to compress a lot of infomation into single sentences. If you
can, try to break it up more into separate thoughts because you've got
a great start.
You defiantly have a the message down in the media pitch. In your lead I would suggest mentioning how CVAIA is available to everyone.
ReplyDeleteJamie,
ReplyDeleteI think your draft looks great. In the final, I might try to include a quote from Preston. Also, I think we might have to use to accepted boilerplate for all publications, but that's something you'd want to ask Preston.
Nicole